Need opinions on my work's newsletter...

Discussion in 'Off-Topic Discussion' started by Dale, Jun 11, 2009.

  1. Dale

    Dale Administrator

    I manage an e-commerce web site for an Audio & Video store. We have developed a newsletter and would like to get feedback (good or bad) on what you think of it.

    Sound Approach Insider Newsletter:

    You can't hurt my feelings- I just want honest responses.

  2. sir jon

    sir jon Spellbinder

    Looks good to me, Dale. I'm not in that industry, so I'm not sure what would make it good or bad. It does look like the standardized format for all sorts of newsletters, though. If you were trying to break form, it doesn't really do that. I'd imagine it does the job, no?
  3. Dale

    Dale Administrator

    Not trying to break from the traditional format. Just wanted to know if it looked appealing or looked like crap. Anything glaringly wrong, etc. I'm trying to improve what we are currently doing.

    Thanks for the input my friend.
  4. Druvas

    Druvas Spellbinder

    Nice newsletter. You might make it a bit clearer where the link to the online catalog is located; maybe a more prominent position. Other than that it looks great.

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